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And My Heart Goes Boom

I think about you all the time
And smile.

and miss.
....its too late!


Your gone and its my fault.
But now when I see you I never wish to go.

Maybe it's time to stay.
I love you to this day.

I can't bear this without you.
It hurts too much.


It hurts your gone.
Come back.


I know, I know.
You miss me too.


Thats why your gone.
Because its wrong for us to love each other.


We still do.
<3


And now, my heart goes boom.

whenever I think about you.
whenever I hear about you.
Whenever I talk about you.

And now, my heart tingles.

whenever you say I love YOU.
whenever you say you love my laugh.
whenever i hear your voice.

And now, my heart goes boom.

by just the thought of seeing you.


My heart goes boom.



I've fallen in love with you,

Troublemaker<3

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  • xXmidnightstarXx
    December 10, 2008

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    awe
    Brandi this is sweet
    you know
    you guys have gone through a lot of shit, and honestly, I don't see how you two are still together
    But I guess that just has to prove that you two love each other.

    Now
    about the poem
    I thought it was a little wierd how some of it ryhmed and some of it didn't, but I love the pictures it painted, and honestly, it does an amazing job describing how love feels, and how it stays, even though there is a distance. Love this write of yours chicka. And you thought you couldn't write poetry

    You deserve more than 3 clappy things.. but hey..