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Angel pathways

Humanity sails the land,
through the poets hands,
touching the soul with ,
amazing grace from every ,
corner of the human race,
with moments of gratitude,
echos of creative plenitude,

connecting each pathway ,

as one yet we are many ,

miles apart across the sea,

air and land but every precious,

moment fills our heart with glee.

 

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Option 2 -

Heart to Heart though Far Apart

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  • Nicada silver member
    December 11, 2008

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    This is very lovely, and I can relate so well to the feelings of closeness in heart, even though many I meet here are so far away. As poets we share a wonderful and strong bond no matter where we are physically. Nice job, and thanks so much for entering. Blessings, Patty


  • Alyzeh
    December 11, 2008

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    Oh wow! Brilliant prompt and you painted such beautiful images with your words in my mind.. stunning maralisa.

    Congrats on the trophy love
    Alyzeh


  • LadyDementia gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Congrats on the HM!

    Nicely penned hunni, imagery is superb and the emotions uplifting. Congrats on the HM


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    excellent~

    This is beautiful
    Good job on the green trophy
    Definitely worthy of it......
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Beautiful
    I love the gentleness and the feelings your words have penned.
    How true I loved it
    Best wishes and good luck
    Julie


  • daviscth
    December 10, 2008

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    You have created a beautiful piece of poetry! I love the imagery and the title is perfect. Good luck in Julie's contest.


  • penman gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    Wonderful

    So very well expressed. A great choice of words. Best of luck in the contest


  • chilali
    December 10, 2008

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    Wow. This is so beautiful. I love it. Good luck to you in the contest

    Much love
    Ylova


  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    echoesoff plentitude connectin pathways...Weall learn from others penned words..hoever far apart we are. good luck in the contest

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