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The Lotus Flower Opens...

My Lover ties my hair with beautiful bands
My slender arms adorned with diamond bracelets so tender and cool.
She kneels before me stroking with gentleness my feet,and
Places upon them anklets of precious jewels.
My neck is adorned of jewels made with teeth.
My slender hips from which silken garments flow
she now carefully unfurls
She gasps ...
From her sacred sex where treasure secret hide and source of all delight.
Two bodies dance to the rthym of the hearbeat
The warmth of her body, my gasping breaths has fanned passion into flames.
Beautiful lady lay with me
Give me your pleasure again and again
My lover burns with desire.
Like ivy that twines around a tree
I cling to her body, wrapping every part of myself around her.
My Yoni like a fresh lotus flower opens to my lover
Her body taut as a bow shoots me with arrows of love.
Having tasted of bodily pleasure the shattering thrill of climax
Our bodies collapse unable to bare anymore.
We lay together in perfect contentment.









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  • pain in colorado
    January 12
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    A very sensual poem.


  • SummerlandRayne gold member
    December 29, 2008
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    Very nice sensual write...thank you for the entry!

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    Thank you for your very sensual offering to my contest, good luck, Josie


  • RareFlower
    December 10, 2008

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    exquisite words of lovemaking

    A rich tapestry of wonderous words and exotic Imgaes. The senses become alive in this beautiful Poem. A climax wished by any lovers. Lovely and exquisite. Thankyou for sharing
    RF