the pain that over comes me
when i watch you with her
is unbearable and i can't take it
it feels like you would rather
spend all of your time with her
instead of with me
i watch my world
come crashing down at my feet
as my heart crumbles to dust
my heart grows cold
with anger
with pain
as the rain resembles my tears
the clouds grow darker
as my pain continues to grow
the clouds grow thicker
as the tears build up
i hold it all in
afraid to let it all out
i know it is bad for my health
appearently i don't care
i'd rather be sick
than show the weakness
i hold inside
the pain that over comes me
when i see you with her
is unbearable and i can't take it
when i stand alone
in my room at night
i let the tears fall down
without a sound
even though i let it out
when i am all alone
it is still too late
i am already sick
even if it does not show
the clouds stay dark and thick
because that pain never goes
nor do the tears that i cry
the pain that over comes me
when i see you with her
is unbearable and i can't take it
but i stand strong
and hold back the tears
and the pain
until i am alone
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I am speechless!!
"every tear that wells up is my own and no one else touches it"
Bella I love this ..... can't say anything more
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Wish you the best!
The pain used to control and consume me until I could no longer think or act. It was a growing process to learn how to keep my emotions from washing me away.
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beautiful words, emotional meaning and a hungry heart....You do spectacular.
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this is so sad and I can totally relate. Really emotional and deep. Just a great write!!! Good luck in the contest
Sydney
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I am literally crying right now.
Very emotional.
I wish you luck in the contest. -
awww so emo hon hehe
is righten as tho from the heart , like you were upset while rightin it , good poem my fave bit is "as the rain resembles my tears
the clouds grow darker
as my pain continues to grow
the clouds grow thicker
as the tears build up" just put me in awe
keep rightin babe ly xx
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oh and this bit made my mouth drop "i'd rather be sick
than show the weakness
i hold inside
i watch my world
come crashing down at my feet
as my heart crumbles to dust"
yyouve got a gift keep righten xx
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