The Force
Your muse was chewy Chelsey and I salivated sweetly as I munched it.
With nutty little nodules it was peppered like a fruit cake, so I crunched it.
Metaphysically I nibbled like a little mousey as I lunched it.
Muses are just there like energy in outer space, you bunch it.
The Force!
A contest entry
- Help me find my muse! by Chazz.
4500 points, ended December 27, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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It's kinda a strange write for me.
But the rhythms are a bit complicated and hopefully it'll twist your head into shape. The two major influences are the theme song from Petticoat Junction which keeps running through my head because I'm working in a hotel and the night manager is named Bobbi Jo, and a song from The Rocky Horror Picture Show; Damnit Janet. Have a happy. -
lol, very nice. Thanks much for the great write. It certainly made me smile and encouraged me to continue. I'll be sure to try out "The Force" once again!
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