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Eyes are deep

They say eyes are deep, tell a story from within

I sacrificed my life, for your sordid little sin

Eyes can’t feel the pain, the hunger or the thirst

They only tell your secrets, with a tearful outburst

 

They say eyes are deep, tell a story from within

Needing from the start, wanting to begin

You fed me with your words; your only love is me

I wanted you for you

And me to be me

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  • Rinoasis
    December 30, 2008

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    Eyes are deep indeed. In fact, they eyes of the girls is what awe-struck me the most. I'm glad to see you wrote a poem inspired by that.

    Thank you for entering my contest!
    Blessings,
    ~Moonchild


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    such divine beauty and truth in these cuplets you've written
    lovely

    good luck to you


  • sheltered
    December 9, 2008

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    great rhyme
    and overall wording
    i was just thinking
    i hadn't seen you on in ages the other day
    and here you are
    hoping things are well with


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Awesome. You took that pic and made it your own.