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Locked in my mind

Hate this
the way I feel
Angry
frustrated
not quite right.

This isn't me
don't think these thoughts
don't like hearing the words
this isn't what I ment.

Why
Why do I feel so scared
it's getting hard to comprehend
is this right
should I listen to the words?
Read between the lines?

The walls are caving
windows becoming black
starting to feel like theres no turning back.

Silent statements
all around me
questioning my actions
reading into me

Nails in the coffin
even though I'm alive
Heads in a flurry
as my thoughts tell me it's true
I can't trust no one
not even you.

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Writing the unknown

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  • nasty24
    June 26
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    this is a very good poem about confused thoughts. keep up the great work.


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    powerful un certainties,, emerge in your mind,,we all endure this , well written ,peter