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would you ever care?

just let me cry
just let me cut
just let me fade away
would you EVER care?

I'm always standing in your way
always doing everything wrong
even if I killed myself,
you wouldn't care

but you're my dad
you're supposed to mean a lot to me
and I cry and cry, cut and cut
but nothing changes your love

I waste my time
hoping praying begging
DADDY WOULD YOU EVER LOVE ME,
EVER CARE FOR ME?

no you won't
you would love to see me dead
like that night you threatened
to kill me yourself

so daddy dear, here's my knife
take it, just take my life
all I want is your love
I'll give my life, is that enough?

I guess it's one of the reasons I'm so depressed lately, I've never been as depressed as I am now, it sucks bigtime

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  • broken-angel
    January 2
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    aw thats really sad hun nearly had me crying, great write tho very powerful xx


  • black-tears
    December 11, 2008
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    thanks darlin


  • Horcrux.Breathing
    December 9, 2008
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    brings tears to my eyes it was that good

    this is so sad it makes me cry beautifully written well done.