There's a breeze that
brought a different light
to her eyes, and
veil that covers
the innocence.
Author notes
To my great niece Samantha and her precious Mother, Yvette.
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i liked the way you captured the innocence. you must really love her alot. this is such a meaningful poem i can tell. best of luck. <3
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awww adorable picture and the poem is a nice accompaniment.
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Doesn't everything look so much better - strained through a blue veil ... or a white one ... unreal, but real. Cutie pie.
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Beautiful
I think you meant innocence? I might be wrong, but had to ask... Beautifully written. There is nothing more precious than the innocence of a child... and watching them discover the world through that innocence...
innocence:
the quality or state of being innocent; freedom from sin or moral wrong; freedom from legal or specific wrong; guiltlessness: The prisoner proved his innocence; simplicity; absence of guile or cunning; naiveté; lack of knowledge or understanding.
innocense:
white and lavender to pale-blue flowers grow in perfect rings of widely spaced bands around the stems forming a kind of pagoda
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Yes! A typo. Thank you. Oh thank you! haha.
I do those from time to time.
I love the other spelling definition. You know. I did NOT know that. And for some reason, I thought you were poetically captioning the picture! Is t hat a revelation or is that a revelation..........hmmmmmm.
Bless you for such a neat comment, observation, your time, and of course just the thought.
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Lovely observational poem complimenting this darling picture! Write On dear poet!
Dennis
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Mystical visions through the innocence eyes! Beautiful,and so is lill'Sammy girl.Hug her for me.
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awh..thank you, sis!
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