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Partaking of Christmas

 

 

Illuminated candy canes, bells and wreaths,

cling to lampposts along snow-covered streets.

 

The night air is crisp, dulcet carols are sung,

from rejoicing spirits of both old and young.

 

Laughter can be heard throughout the city,

from children of all ages just feeling giddy.

 

Snowmen are built, some big, some small,

while a new batch of snow begins to fall.

 

The season's replete with a special joy,

starting in the heart of a small girl or boy.

 

It's a time to reflect with love and compassion,

to give of one's self, though it may seem old-fashion.

 

Gifts are exchanged with smiles and love,

but there is so much we're neglectful of.

 

The homeless, the lonely, the hungry, the cold,

the helpless, the tired, the sick and the old.

 

If we would give kindness to someone in need,

just think of the blessings we'd reap with that seed.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Yes scenario is joyful one..and the screness behind words is seen through the impact of the thought..wonderful crafting ..well done..


  • Midnight Breeze
    December 12, 2008

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    Wonderful Job!!! I love reading your work, it always cheers me up!! You are a very talented writer, I still haven't wrote a thing yet. I've been pretty busy. I think I might write a Christmas poem as well. I love this Background, It's Beautiful!! Well, Merry Christmas!!


  • Sandi Alford gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    So many delightful images Pam, with a wonderful message at close. I'm left feeling nostalgic, those cozy fuzzy feelings of warm and peace and sharing of ones heart. It's a special time indeed this 'partaking of Christmas' Excellent poem!

    Wishing you and yours a most blessed holiday season! Sandi


  • Vickie J
    December 11, 2008

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    What a wonderful sentimental write-we have so much and we take it for granted and often times don't think of what we can do to bring joy into others lives.


  • daviscth silver member
    December 10, 2008

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    What an amazing Christmas poem. Your words hold such wonderful wisdom and I just love the images.

  • darrylblacksr
    December 9, 2008

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    Blessed are they that follow in the word and walk in the spirit of God by helping those who are less fortunate then themselves. This is what true love is all about and I thank you for sharing this with me. God bless you and yours...


  • troyias silver member
    December 9, 2008

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    Beautiful

    well written. the rythem and flow are wonderfully expressed, the emotions true and wondrous. it is totally delightful. Great job.

    *Go with God* my friend,

    Valerie

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