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Within A Sigh~

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The disparity of soft souls

Is as honesty on a hinge

A song without a whisper heard

Is a smolder without a singe

 

Chronicles let us evolve

To solve our fate of solitaire

As we collide, let us abide

By global golden rules we share

 

Imbue our youth with vision’s eye

To visualize their dreams of peace

Let our harvest fall from heaven

And harden hearts find loves release

 

So passion can fulfill those souls

Tangled within thin threaded rope

And whispers be heard upon winds

Singing anew pure hymns of hope

 

Across the seven seas lets soar

Flutter our wings as angels high

Live to love, and cherish each breath

For precious is compassion’s cry

 

Within a sigh~

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Hope, Love, all within a sigh~

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  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    August 6

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    sigh....sigh...sigh...how I love your work, your love, your soul, this is so beautifully penned, and I adore it! Thank you for sharing you, it is a treasure...love, Dawn


  • Stirrer of Stardust
    July 5

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    Hmmm.....

    "Is as honesty on a hinge"

    Put me on the brink with that one. Literally felt as if I were on the edge of a steep cliff.

    Quite nicely done, dear one.

    Love & Blessings,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


  • queenie
    July 5

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    another poetic masterpiece. i don't think there is anything you write that doesn't touch my heart and soul and highlight the beauty of you. i think of you and i can feel your spirit. you are as wonderful as you write. this is at the top!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    July 5

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    This is really beautiful bro as is everything
    that you write! Well done and congratulations
    to you on your trophy. It's always a pleasure to read your work here! Have a wonderful week ahead!




    Jeremy0826


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    July 5

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    i know i am real late in coming, i have to agree with all the others this is beautiful! and to be spot lighted too!! well done


  • ViolentSerenity
    July 5

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    wow this is amazingly beautiful I have read a variety of your writting, its all so graceful and sophistocated, definately a talented writer. Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece with us I know I speak for more then just myself when I say we love reading your work. beautiful write! Blessed be.
    Sincerely;
    ♥ViolentSerenity♥


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    July 4

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    breathtaking,

    thia is the most beautiful poem i have read in a long time.
    it warms the soul and fills the heart with hope.
    i usally try to find a favorite part in every poem i read, but to be honest i fell in love with every single word in this piece. i can clearly see why this lovely piece of art made t to the spotlight.
    this is the 3rd time i red this piece, that's how much it touched my heart.
    very well done my poet friend.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    joyce


  • poet2angels gold member
    July 4

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    oh, Bro this is beautiful..Congrats on the spotlight. I think all of your poems should be here
    This is goin in my faves list

    Lynda


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 2

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    Needed some loving and knew where to go..another amazing piece and truly dont know how i missed this one. Lovely, breathtaking, ..

    thank you

    Love
    Passions


  • Swangrnv gold member
    June 10

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    wow

    this is magical my friend! great imagery, tight smooth rhyme and flow, and outstanding message..Atop favorite, heading right into my lists of top favs.

  • Out Out
    January 17
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    I got the most meaning from the second verse. Its true how we need to live our lives by ourselves while respecting others. No one else can live another's life but that doesn't mean we have to shut people out. Thanks. I got more meaning out this than I could write.


  • penman gold member
    January 17
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    Wonderful

    A great creation on the theme. Congratulations on the silver. It was well deserved.


  • StarEyes
    January 16

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    This is beyond words! You really did a wonderful job on this one! Some of the images, some of what was said, touched me deeper than you know. What a great read! One worth bookmarking for many reads when I am a low point! Thank you for this read!

    Congrats on the Silver!

    and love

    Nyetta


  • Stardust-luvr
    January 16
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    i needed the magic of your words tonihgt thank you for erasing my tears xxx love you bro!!!


  • Ithica silver member
    January 9

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    Your words, as usual manage to inject a measure of hope into my day. You have a grand hand for these inspirational writes!!! Thank-you for sharing your noble heart with us...


  • Introvert2006
    January 8
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    Beatiful!


  • weaverwonderland
    January 8

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    True inspiration!!! Live to love, and cherish each breath For precious is compassion's cry within a sigh-- What a amazing gift God gave you !!
    Dad @ Mom xoxo


  • bluesky
    January 7
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    so cool


  • bluesky
    January 7
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    so cool i think you no my mom leana.


  • xXvampire20 loverXx
    December 22, 2008
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    I LOVE IT

    your poem was very inspiring i love it your poem flows very well and has really good rhyming


  • Gwenevere
    December 20, 2008
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    A lovely poem with a special message.Well done, Ros


  • rinzurajan
    December 19, 2008

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    LOVED THE LINES...

    Live to love, and cherish each breath

    For precious is compassion’s cry


    BEAUTIFUL MESSAGE...



  • PerfectImperfection
    December 15, 2008

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    Wow... This is such a well poised piece!!! That initial stanza itself has such a fantastic flow about it - that alone was enough to pull me in ... I am in awe of these rhyming skills of yours!!! Just amazing really, no matter what I read from you, it leaves its mark. A wonderful write bro!!!


  • hawkeslake gold member
    December 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done, excellent rhymes and meter, wonderful word choices, and the sentiments are well-expressed. How lovely to think of the next generation learning to wage peace!

  • Eusebius
    December 14, 2008

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    Yes, a highly romantic piece, most ably done with some excellent phrases here, the final line and title are superb! Loved it...


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 13, 2008
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    lovley

    read with a sigh


  • moon2u
    December 13, 2008

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    congratulations Timothy

    compassion love and peace
    the perfect recipe for humanity

    hugs Moony

  • HeartsFlowers
    December 12, 2008
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    Love it

    This is gorgeous...nicely done!


  • Angelflower
    December 12, 2008

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    This was beautiful, you crafted this write so softly.. Truly something that reaches out and touches the reader.. Well worthy of Silver.. Thank you very much for sharing.


    Angel

  • Francis Vincent
    December 11, 2008
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    very good

    now i know why
    i've been doing so muchsughing lately


  • neverquiet
    December 11, 2008
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    melting away

    words spoken such as "Harden hearts find loves release" My heart melts at these.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    Lovely! Love these words...
    "Live to love, and cherish each breath
    For precious is compassion’s cry"
    ...sigh...I so believe this!


  • Wandika gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    Beautiful Tim


  • Aimee Hill
    December 11, 2008

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    "Live to love, and cherish each breath
    For precious is compassion’s cry"

    Holy wow...Beautiful words, Timothy. I fear that some don't live as that line above states, though.... Quite sad.

    However..your poem isn't
    I love it, of course, I always love reading you.
    Your pen is over flowing with that thing called love and you do your absolute best to make sure we all see and feel it too.

    You're awesome babycakes!!
    Simply Awesome


  • insideinsanity
    December 11, 2008

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    I absolutely your word choices. WONDERFUL.

    The entirety of the poem, and its meanings, are so simply summed up in the last word... beautiful.


  • ast1515
    December 11, 2008
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    beautiful


  • Lonely
    December 10, 2008

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    Tim, this piece is a pure masterpiece.. And Im so sorry for getting around to it so late! But I did get around didnt I ? I totally love it, and I must say, the words used in this poem, and the rhyming scheme is just so wonderful.. The message behind this poem is one that you know very well is what I feel and think most of the time.. I love it, must say one of your bestest. It deserved gold in my point of view.. I loved it

    Love always
    Lonely


  • SubKitten
    December 10, 2008

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    Amazingly written.

    "The disparity of soft souls
    Is as honesty on a hinge"

    I love that line, not sure what it is about it, but it just struck me rather hard. I also like the little bit of internal rhyme in the second stanza. It was an interesting touch.

    "For precious is compassion’s cry

    Within a sigh~"

    I like the way that worked, too. Truelly brilliant writting.


  • EeyoreUK
    December 10, 2008
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    your words never cease to amaze me, you definately have a talent my friend.


  • Mariana gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    'Across the seven seas lets soar
    Flutter our wings as angels high
    Live to love, and cherish each breath
    For precious is compassion’s cry
    Within a sigh~'

    Heartful and true. Bravo Poet! Congratulations on the silver

    Mariana


  • Jalalbad gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    is simply beautiful, there are no words to describe this pure poetry and truth.
    You are a blessed soul Tim.

  • Stardust-luvr
    December 10, 2008

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    my dearest you have once agian brought me to flowing tears with the sigh of the beauty and the magic of your spirit spoken in the wonders of your words and the love and compassion that spills from your heart and pen. There are many different lines that speak to my own heart but I would say the lines that touched my soul the most were ~~ the last stanza and how much I hope for everyone else' hope and happiness reigns forth over my own.

    Congrats on the SILVER!!I embrace your words with open arms much love always. Many blessings and warmth always xxxxxx Love your sis-Star


  • Intricate Wordsmith
    December 10, 2008

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    Breath-Taking

    I absolutely adored every word in this poem and I wish I could even come close to expressing an emotion or idea like this. You will be famous one day, but sadly I do not think that the people who will discover your vivid talent even know that you are out here yet. My favorite section of this poem is the third stanza. I love, Love, LOVE that part!!! There needs to be no re-editing in this poem. Well Done!!!


  • rite
    December 10, 2008

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    Your words seem to increasingly touch deeper parts of our souls. We may be aware without knowing (which at times is a type of excruciating curse), simply following the soft whispers of intuition that is perhaps the most flawless gift bestowed on us. On this page it resulted in a poem that I enjoyed reading very much. Thank you for creating and sharing. Take care and may you have a wonderful holiday season!


  • musicamuse
    December 10, 2008

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    love it!!!

    I love your wording and flow. The rhyme never sounds forced which is a problem with many poets. The only part I'd look over is the first stanza. I don't know how it flows with the rest of the poem only because of the number of syllables. That being said, I didn't find much wrong with it. I had to really search to find something to critique. Well done. I'm left with a feeling of soft beauty. Thank you.


  • ariazephyrzoe gold member
    December 10, 2008

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    Beautiful, I could only sigh ... Love the title, a lot of words spoken softly within.


  • SmokinHotWhiteTiger
    December 9, 2008

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    Beauty

    Oh what can I say but ya did it again I always admired an incredible love poem from any poet as it really draws inspiration for myself and probably many others to write with such an emotion such as love. any ways with that being said I really love the flow depth and feleing through out this write. I really felt like this was pure happiness a sif someone found their true parasdise in this damaged goods world we live in,. any ways a strikingly beautiful poem full of love and so much more. keep up the good work as always bro


  • Mary O gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    I love the breath of this poem, so lovely. Very well done, Good luck to you. I think a winner.
    ~Mary O


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    December 9, 2008

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    awww bro this is so sweet! I think this is one of your best, its so easy to read and has such a personal depth to me! I love this so much, your karma and depth in this poem are immaculate, and i loved it
    all my love
    kitty xx


  • Rheea gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Timothy, always from your heart comes every thing you write. This is so pretty like lace so fine and fragile. special.


  • Desire gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Oh My~

    This is one Magnificent piece my Friend and Beautiful message to touch deep~
    Excellent presentation also energy brought forth
    Loved this as always!!
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in the contest Sweet Soul
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • charmander13
    December 9, 2008

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    Oh wow, this is so beautiful- you literally took my breath away! I especially love this line,

    "Live to love, and cherish each breath
    For precious is compassion’s cry"

    -and the angel imagery is brilliant.

    Great write!

    Thank you for such a lovely entry and all the best to you!




  • Trupoet
    December 9, 2008

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    Such beauty you have inside, i loved this piece Tim

    love and huggss

    your dear friend Elena

    kisses


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    get on down then Mushy honey the way you penned this came straight from a poet emotional genius i so love this poem it was well penned as you always do my friend good luck in the contest


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Beautiful my bro.

  • Draig aine gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    a sigh indeed

    So passion can fulfill those souls

    Tangled within thin threaded rope

    And whispers be heard upon winds

    Singing anew pure hymns of hope

    beautifully penned bravo


  • poetryrocksmysox
    December 9, 2008

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    Lovely!!!

    You are so talented, and I admire your works!
    Thanks for sharing your heart and soul.
    Much love to you and yours, and this piece is inspirational indeed. Keep up the wonderful works!


    Me.


  • Patience15
    December 9, 2008

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    Imbue our youth with vision’s eye

    To visualize their dreams of peace

    Let our harvest fall from heaven

    And harden hearts find loves release



    So passion can fulfill those souls

    Tangled within thin threaded rope

    And whispers be heard upon winds

    Singing anew pure hymns of hope



    Across the seven seas lets soar

    Flutter our wings as angels high

    Live to love, and cherish each breath

    For precious is compassion’s cry



    Within a sigh~

    Those were my favorite lines! The poem was just so beautiful as a whole. It amazed me. Great job!!


  • Stormy Days
    December 9, 2008

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    AMAZING BEAUTIFUL

    This is really... amazing dad really beautiful so well written it flows well and this is cool


  • FaerieNWonderland
    December 9, 2008

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    BEAUTIFUL

    this is great!
    i really like this, it flows so well. you wrote this beautifully.
    i always enjoy a good love, hope poem, and this is truly amazing.
    i loved reading this, thanks for sharing.

    your Faerie

  • weaverwonderland
    December 9, 2008
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    Wow,

    You are simply amazing Timothy, you have weaved a beauty here, and I love the word sigh by itself, but wow, you really used some sweet vocab here son!!! I'm so proud of you, and all you put your pen to reads beautifully! Another winner, no doubt!!!


    Love Mom.

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