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You

I remember the concrete doors
The iron padded locks
The barred windows
The blood stained soap
The cold ground
The puddles... and your face
Your touch
Your eyes
Your smile
Your laugh
Your faith
Your passion
Your love
You

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    wow...i like really love this..it tore at my heart, like a sad.....depressing dying love...where you hold on..and he just rips you or she...lol
    and it kills...


    nicely done, and thanks for entering
    Stephanie ♥