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Carmen Jones

Word
For real though
Up pup up pup

Word up
Hey
For real though
Ah ah ah ah

Ya see it is...

Simply my affinity
that you take me into your arms
Proceed to rap on me but
not a tired one
Cause I can see
straight through to the undies
so speak with the precision
of Darius Lovehall
and with blurred vision
I can be that “Blues for Nina”

Rap on
Hold me in your arms
Want you to look into my eyes
Tell me of elaborate schemes
created to prevent
my joint forces with another man
If I was hard headed and did not
comply with your amorous plans
Deep kisses under somebody’s Africa

or a twin in a near foreign night
We would both be flyin
Not of drugs but passion fruit
You down on one knee
like you was gone proposed to me
Call my attention to your lap
because... I would really like that
Sing to me my favorite song
and be off key
I would be roll sweetly

Tell me my locks didn’t
have to be down my back
for you to be intensely
attracted
It could be 2 inches from
my scalp
Simply that would cause
you to pass out
Enthralled with my
fierce confidence
You haven’t seen heaven since

Taking comfort in the deepest maple skin
A proud dip in it’s dark recipe
Day break doesn’t come with a guarantee
and a trophy
Continue growing your roots in
this here vicinity

Let me hear you moan
from the thrill of taking me
in your steady arms
A single rose buds about my throne
Presence of you
with a firm embrace where it’s on
Then I'll be home...
like Carmen Jones

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  • Desire gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Wow~

    Oh My Word Lady
    I saw that title and images came flooding along with Your words written-
    I had to go and reintroduce myself to the musical with Dorothy Dandridge~
    Holy Moly my eyes began to swell
    Excellent~ Loved this!!
    and comment in the AC


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent also Spirit~
    Many blessings to You Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


    • LaMerci
      December 10, 2008
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      Thank you

      love...you're going to have me spoiled Desire-smile.
      We share the same spirit... we are poets, our thread is the same, our fabrics may arrive in different patterns and designs but that spirit moves us and it has to manifest itself even when no one pays attention.