My love is like a flower
It needs tender loveing care
It needs to know you love me
That you will always be there
My love is like a rare, rare bloom
That opens to your touch
My love is full of wonderment
And will fill you very much
My love is very tender dear
It caresses your heart so true
My love surrounds your every being
For you darling only you
So take my love and place it
Inside the pocket of your heart
For we two shall always be
We will never ever part
A contest entry
- My love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
400 points, ended December 23, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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amen..this is really a wonderful thought and very positive work bringing the life and hope together..well done..
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Thank you PrabhuDayal. So glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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You are there again with all your sincerity of the love and the acknowledgement of this love in your life..this is really a heart ful write..well done..
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Some striking lines here: "My love is like a rare, rare bloom" as well as "Inside the pocket of your heart."
Nice rhymes and flow.
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Thank you judyjudyjudy. Glad you enjoyed reading my poem.
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Wow! This was really great! I enjoyed reading it.
I loved the imagry of writing the poem.
Overall I think this one was a great write!
wow this says alot and is very good
can't wait to read more!!
hoping to keep in touch with your work
Let me know if and when you write more poems!
All the best!
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Glenn
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Thank you Glenn, you must have been the first to read this as soon as it was posted. Glad you enjoyed my poem. I have written several today. You can click on my website and read them.
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