This is my life,
sad and depress,
Every one in my life,
disappers, leaving me
to stray,
every single day.
She shouldnt of went,
to the party that night,
got drunk,
nothing went right.
so she got in her car,
and left.
next thing you know,
comes her death.
i cry my tears,
while hoping, she okay.
living in a fear
an other friend,
not even close to the end,
10th friend to die.
in only a few years.
Found the love of my life.
couldnt be happier.
started poping the pills,
sunddly he got ill.
woke up one morning
notice he didnt call,
so i called his phone,
only to get his mom,
she said he wasnt home.
later that day,
as i went my way,
i got a call,
i cant forget at all.
Tears started to form,
as i set on the floor,
wondering why he would do this?
He took all the pills,
so he wouldnt feel the pain.
but only to know God called his name.
i went to the funral depress and sad,
wondering why i was so mad.
the cuts started to form,
as i took the razer to my wrist,
as the blood left a stain of memory
on my chest.
my heart ech, hurt so bad,
thinking nothing else could go
worst then this.
Octorber 10, 2 months later,
get a phone call saying
my cousin go murered.
the cuts get deeper,
as i start to cry,
wondering who and why?
i started poping pills, hoping to end it all.
Hoping soon, maybe God will call!
Author notes
i have been threw a LOT in my life, boys cheating, friend dieing. its just all too painful!
A contest entry
- Why by charmander13.
700 points, ended December 24, 2008, 24 entries
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Comments
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Likewise i can feel your pain in this one i have expierenced stuff like this before. Good Job
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this is really sad and also really good but please dont go too far, life for me sucks but i wouldnt do that just keep on writing your really good
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Ohmygod. Hey dear, hope you're okay! Just write, write, write it all out! Oh boy, don't hurt yourself anymore okay?
A semi-depressed, semi-hyper poem for ya
http://allpoetry.com/poem/4849215
Everyone has problems... so feel free to talk to me anytime!
Anyhow thank you so much for your entry and all the best yeah!
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