Reaching with shaking fingers
You caress my glassy skin.
You see none of what I see
And none of what I am in.
Suffering, desperate to reach you
Let you acknowledge me.
I’m the core in the depths of deep
I’m the conscious that helps you see.
Reflected on mirror class
Displayed to all but you
I’m invisible, I’m hidden
I’m forgotten by you.
All I seek is for you to know
I exist right here
In the depths, inside of you.
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Author notes
Dreaming that you're blind or can't see yourself or your reflection means, as I read someday, that you're neglacting an important part of yourself. Seek it, this might solve your dream.
Best of luck! 
Thanks for reading!
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A contest entry
- A blind girl at the mirror by Amazon Huntress.
850 points, ended December 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Succinct, but you say a lot in a few words, which is always commendable. The idea of glassy skin is tactile and very fitting. Interesting and strangely touching take on my dream. Thanks for the poem!
*~Huntress~*
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Ah..what else one can do and where one go to exist if love is lost..just a piece of your heart in words of great poetry..well done...
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awwwwwwwww
that's really sad.....i felt like this before
well done though good poem
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You/ you're poetry makes me think, question , and analys (sp?) and it visually guides me,,,thanks for sharing,,, good luck in the contest
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This is amazing.Just one thing. The first line - I think you mean to write 'shaking'. Best to you in the contest
Much love
Ylova
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I always get confused between shacking and shaking. duh! Thanks for pointing out.
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You are welcome love Btw. I love your new display picture, but you already know that! hahaha
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I love yours ,too.
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