The honest one betrayed
by the truth left alone crushed
by the ruth of the preveiling
question why
To lie a lie forms...
the sweetest tie
of time only to fear
it's parting a time in longing
to fear the near time changing
of a past time for our last time
yet again anothor new age crime
cast in what was ment
to last in time the only
question left to ask is why?
As the lost men cry
the lonly men die
left to ask why! god! why!
god doesn't answer
can i ask what if god doesn't care?
fix my spelling!! please and any major grammer issues to
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I can truly see the meaning behind this, well at least I think I can, anyway. So many people believe in Christianity, a religion where god would save us. Yet, so many crimes go on to those who are so innocent, to those who are lost, to those who never had the chance to live, and they are such faithful people to Christ, yet he never answers. So, your message: god doesn't answer.
I really liked this piece of work.
And...
I REALLY FUCKING MISS YOU!
Give me a call sometime.
I am practically free until January 12th.
It feels like a year has gone by since I have last seen you.
I miss you like a fat kid loves McDonald's, Faygo, and Little Debbie cakes.
CALL ME!!!!!
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wooooooooow!
Great write!
I am glad you that u can write good poems and yet u r not writing for contest.
my dear pal,
God listens to us
god answers us too (God has used bible for this)
so plz read untill u get, y he is doing like this.
I loved this one, the meaning, the depth and the emotions they all mix very well together.
You're good at short writes so keep it up.
,
&
Glenn
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thank you really not really a faithful person as my writings depict but i have been trying i'm opeaning presents now comment your work later^^ lol
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