if i was a star i swear i would surf the galaxy
as if it were the internet
if i were a surfing a star, i would take lots of pictures
i take pictures with aliens i met
if i were riding the milkway, or swim in it if i could
i'd wear a snow suit so i wouldnt get wet
if i were a star, i would glitter, twinkle and glow
i'd shine like a baby sun
if i were a star, i would not waste the opppotunity
cos i know for a fact it'd be fun
if i were a star i would reach out to my boyfriend
cos he'd do the same for me, and he the only one
A contest entry
- Reveal to me a world beyond your imagination. by NoMoreAThought.
400 points, ended December 16, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Earn your points... by crisstiena.
5000 points, ended December 26, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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oh poem with rhyme? wow
Wow! This was really great! I enjoyed reading it.
I loved the imagry of writing the poem.
Overall I think this one was a great write!
wow this says alot and is very good
can't wait to read more!!
hoping to keep in touch with your work
Let me know if and when you write more poems!
All the best!
,
&
Glenn
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