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Hidden Seed

Tender petals of emotion are there
Clutched within my pounding heart
And deep within this seed so fair
There lies the greatest unknown art

Soft golden beams of light appear
Shall clasp my seed in strong embrace
And waterfalls of soothing tears
May yet the pains of past erase

Yet should you chose to turn your gaze
Return to me no love of thine
Then never shall this flower raise
Its lovely face to bloom, divine

And there shall I remain, encased
By love's sweet seed, at love's behest
Whilst tender petals of emotion placed
And clutched within my wounded breast

Author notes

My love is like a flower, it may forget to bloom, if you ignore it...Unknown.

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    December 12, 2008

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    Ah..quite a touching description you have made through the thought of poetic words..love it..and thanks for sharing it..


  • azlyn gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Sister...this is lovely and touches the soul deeply!

    Blessed be...


  • Katie Lazette
    December 9, 2008
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    Sokarjo, your poem is beautiful. Nice expressions within the poem. Good luck in the contest.

    • Sokarjo
      December 9, 2008
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      Thank you! Very glad you liked it, thank you for reading and commenting.

      S

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