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Loves Longing For.....

Loves longing for the pleasure

My heart will bleed for you

 

Loves longing for seduction

The attire does to you

 

Loves longing for the appetite

The craving that I bring

 

Loves longing for the wanting

The needing and the fling

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  • Titus gold member
    December 11, 2008

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    It is very much like a ghazal, I think you should start researching in the ghazal, I'm sure, after reading this, you'll be an expert at this form. It was sensual, and with insight, intimate. Enjoyed the read, very enjoyable, fresh as a daisy that was.


  • Draig aine gold member
    December 11, 2008
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    I love your style

    it is so crisp, so intense with out baggage so glaf I found your pen


  • sheltered
    December 9, 2008

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    what?
    sitting around and flinging cheetoes
    at one another?
    that is fun!
    whoops, one went down your blouse
    let me get that for you