Thoughts and indistinct images,
fictile possibilities,
float in the sky, sustained,
waiting to condense into
quenching drops of rain.
Author notes
I just finished this poem which I began yesterday; and I think that it fits for this contest.
A contest entry
- ,words disappear .words once so clear by Kirs.
725 points, ended December 25, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Short, but lovely images!
best wishes in the contest
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soo good!!!
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(fictile is a new word that I found by thesaurus.com
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great
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And now captured in essence upon the page.
Nothing escapes the graceful pen of Olivia!
An intriguing image.
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Relief,
and Understanding.
I hope you gained such from writing it as I have gained reading it.
Beautiful, I am very glad you finished it for the contest, I enjoyed it so very much. I am a sucker for short poetry that packs a punch, and, it certainly 'kicked my ass' for lack of a better phrase.
I'd wish you luck, but your poem speaks wonders.
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Thank you so much
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