her eyes is as rich as olives
her curves as delicate as a pear
her hair as the trickling waterfall
her skin as tan
her scent is olives, promegranate, peaches, strawberries, and raspberries
her love drowns me in fire
if i can only be with her
only for just a minute
my life is complete
A contest entry
- Sensual Collabs...Or Sensual Poems... by SummerlandRayne.
1539 points, ended December 29, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think and do you like it?
Comments
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Delicious! Nice verse of sensual wonder. Thank you for the entry.
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Olives
You write beautifully. She sounds good enough to eat!!! Good luck in the contest.
Yorkshire Bard. Blessing
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Is this a collab? Shouldn't it be marked with the name of both authors?
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