well wouldn't you call that
a gentleman's gesture
until you see the other hand
is on his mamma's knee,
lift that and you might take
off mask of security in one
he's only mature down to his baby stomach
which has to stay close to her
scrolled screen
comes to tips of letters topping out
as corolla ridge
clearing imagine I can translate inspiration
in shape spellable still, should be similar by cooperation
sun tea colored deeper
meadow mother taking token's guidance
throws back friend's hair presentable resemblance
by my daughter's hat style for posed supposed girl,
wonder what them two would've been
beyond allowance away from me for funeral
that would've been okay with two year old
but lullaby her name off daytime consistency
inexcused exhausted at heart's sunset
tucking our color into truth reciprocating care
Author notes
afternoons not indulgence
visit together watered purpose
A contest entry
- My love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
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Comments
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Ah..what a gesture of the beautiful immages and the beautiful imapct you made here in the fascinating words of the magical poetry..well done..

