…her eyes mortal quivering red
succulent flesh ripped through by teeth
she reaches awake, I break her neck
not much left of this body to bleed…
hunger the hunter this pitch night
the savage Great White on two legs
mutant feeding machine tonight
a man/animal monster deranged.
A boy walking down an alley
the hot dog vendor going home
a dog and his little old lady
the cab driver asleep at the side of the road.
Not much time for them to scream
the throat is always the first to go
not much time for them to breathe
always the blood drowning out the groans.
Then the following morning
my eyes immortal quivering red
I lie awake and cry…
Author notes
Lycan
A contest entry
- Vamps & Lycans-Do What You Want by upperworld06.
650 points, ended December 23, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Guilt (prewrites welcome) by Danna Hobart.
400 points, ended January 18, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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True werewolf being who he is. I like this as it states just how a werewolf reacts on remembering his deeds. He is an insideious creature with a taste for human flesh and blood and he stalks the night waiting for a victim to quench his thirst. Your words were excellent and the story really came across in quite vivid pictures. Congrats on the trophy. Well deserved.
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thats awesome, i love the end
Then the following morning
my eyes immortal quivering red
I lie awake and cry…
shows how they regret it all, great job and good luck
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I LOVE this!!! Seriously, one of the BEST vampire poems out there!! WOW! I was going to enter that contest but I couldn't think of anything. Well, I don't think theres any point in it. I"d lose if you are what I'm up against. WOW!
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i love your profile pic thing, thats awesome
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