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anywhere but with me



what happens when forever,
ends sooner than you expected,
what happens to the dreams shared,
when you start dreaming for yourself,
how can i express my greatest regret,
was letting you turn your back on me,
when all i can do is try,
is when my effort fails the most,
and when you're sitting in his house,
sitting in comfortable silence,
i know my songs play in your head,
and you won't let it bring you back,
no i'm not interested in the past,
i was naive and self-centered,
what i wanted was the future,
how we've evolved into something more,
no i refuse to plea with you,
though it aches in my bones,
and i can't help wondering,
if maybe it's fear that keeps you away,
fear that maybe i haven't changed,
or maybe fear that i've changed too much,
i don't know what to tell you,
but maybe my voice in your head says enough,
do you really think that's where you should be,
anywhere but with me.

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i just think it's a shame.

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  • Angelic Princess
    December 22, 2008

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    Again...WOW!

    this is really good too. looks like u found some inspiartion... not the good kind but inspiration. good write.

  • luv2dream gold member
    December 10, 2008
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    this poem says so much..i understand how you feel..having been in a longterm relationship that i thought would last forever but ended almost 2 years ago..thought it was a shame too.. but at some point i knew this was all a part of the learning and living.... and i am in a better place now