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Deep Reflection

Missing image

I see through your eyes,

you don't see me.

I whisper to wake you,

set your body free.

 

 

My reflection is of you,

within you is me;

I am part of your reflection

beneath reality.

 

 

I am your inner-voice

that needs to be heard,

cluttered thoughts crowd you,

you haven't heard a word.

 

 

I appear in your dreams,

to let you know I'm here;

I can't get your attention,

your visions unclear.

 

 

I am blind because

you've not yet got your sight,

I'll remain in your dreams;

so in darkness you'll have light.

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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    January 14

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    Love this one

    This is a very inspiring full of faith love and hope. Very nice images and rhyme and flow are great. love reading your stuff. have you wrote a book yet? alexander Blessings, always

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    January 2

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    I loved this the second and third stanzas are just amazing it reminds me of how our society is full of people that are so stuck to themselves and do not see the truth until until they lost the most important things anyway thanks for sharing much love always


  • Amazon Huntress
    December 14, 2008

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    Lovely dream-like language and the idea of the future and the reason for the dream is quite haunting.
    Thanks for the entry!
    *~Huntress~*


  • Providence
    December 10, 2008

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    The gentle flow and ethereal voice is diffenately "Soul Speak". A soft reminder of who we really are!

    Marvelous work.

    Marianne

  • goalsv
    December 10, 2008
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    A great look at the picture. So poetic and pretty that the flow just oozes around you.

  • darrylblacksr
    December 9, 2008

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    Hmm... this is very good my friend and the flow did captivate me to the end. Bless you for sharing this with me and congrats in the contest...


  • AsIThink gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Excellence at work!

    PR, this was incredibly done. So easy to read; so full of reflective ingredients. I enjoyed it and am constantly amazed by your deep insight and keen sense of depth. Another excellent write ...good luck in the contest.

    AsIThink...


  • myrataal silver member
    December 9, 2008
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    Captivating write ...

    Loved the gentle flow and the woven words, spoken with such deep knowing.

    Love
    Myra


  • who iam
    December 9, 2008

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    "I appear in your dreams to let you know I'm here"
    "I am your inner voice that needs to be heard"
    Beautiful insight dear lady
    You never see yourself as others do,but with Him
    he knows everything.
    A winner in my trophy case.


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Totally awesome! "I'll remain in your dreams; so in darkness you'll have light." I do believe we get so over stimulated by all that is around us that we arent' able to hear our inner voice...yet in sleep...in dreams...yes! I like how you present your inner thoughts my friend...and I like how you think! Pam


  • Hikari Lady
    December 9, 2008

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    I love your rythme and your powerful words and feelings. The last stanza has actually blown me away with it's strength and depth. A beautiful write about a senser subject. Best of luck in the contest.

    God bless you
    Much love
    ~Noor


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    WOW!!!

    You consistently blow me away with your powerful and inspirational writes, this is just another example of that..love the rhyme, love the flow..love the message.


  • Denerica
    December 9, 2008
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    Beautiful, uplifting, as if she could see and know, the deep inner self... Blessings dear friend!

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