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Dreams of a psychopath

The light just seems to dull now,
the moonlight shifting in,
Now I hear the voices, saying:
"Come now, let us in."

Whispers turn to screams,
the devils in my dreams,
friendships turned to dust,
no one left to trust,

Burning in my skin,
They whisper from within,
They're inside of me,
That's why you'll never see,

I'm locked inside the padded room,
These Evil whispers speak my doom,
I've tried to tell, I've tried to scream,
Things aren't always what they seem,

I'll rip my tongue, I'll drink the blood,
I'll hide the whispers in the flood,
I'll never speak again, you'll see,
silence was always the only key,

You'll never know the unspoken,
My shredded tongue; the token,
I'll keep the whispers deep within,
You'll never get them through my skin.

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  • BloodSeeker Lette
    December 9, 2008
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    I also like this one as well it good.


  • SheWalksWithDeath
    December 9, 2008

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    I'll rip my tongue, I'll drink the blood,
    I'll hide the whispers in the flood,
    I'll never speak again, you'll see,
    silence was always the only key,


    that was my favorite lines... wow.. this is dark... loved it.