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Drinking Alone pt.3 {The Ride Home}

we came to this place
in the middle of nowhere
these things always happen
in places like this

[They need to know they're ALONE]

odour of liquor cheap beer and urine
these rooms always smell like
a dive

Empty parking lot
Just one dead moth and one dying light

*flickers on, flickers off*

And it's done

Inside the room
Empty bottles
And a familiar scene

The bed is soiled with vomet
Urine and excrement

The final gift of a dying man

It's easy to think
In a setting like this
That the whole world is dying
One at a time

Old Jack at the counter
Has grown calloused and indifferent
(It's just another day)

Maybe SOMEDAY
We'll come to give him a ride

Maybe I'm getting callous too
These runs will do that
Maybe someday
They'll come for me

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