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Lupus: An Innocent Victim Looking For Any Cure

I feel trapped in my own mind,
And now in my body, too.
For my body's defense
Is slowly eating me alive..
What did I do to deserve this?
What punishment will follow?
There is no cure for these flaws,
Both physical and mental..
A suicide attempt and success
May cure me, but what if it does not?
..There's only one way to find out.

Author notes

Systemic Lupus is not fun. And it can be fatal. ...Too bad there's no cure. If you do not know what Lupus is, I suggest you look it up before commenting. Don't be judgmental (if you comment). From the heart and sent online, this is from me to you. Enjoy.. sort of.

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  • uneternal
    December 11, 2008

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    Like I've said before, I wish I could take it on for you.. you don't deserve lupus, Kev. You truly don't. You're a great person whose just been through to much trauma, man. -Hugs- Feel better.


    • ImmortalChains
      December 11, 2008
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      I wouldn't want anyone to bear my cross but me. You have enough problems of your own.. But thanks for your kind words. I'm starting to feel a bit better. Thanks again.