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Jake

What are you dreaming of
my love?
Is it a wish?
Sun shining off you face
hair tangeled in a twist
Wish you could see through my eyes
what I call bliss
Sheets wrapped around
our naked bodys
Your deep breathing agenst my ribs.

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  • cheekyfemme
    December 23, 2008
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    BRILLIANT!

    saraaaa <3 i forgot allpoetry and its refreshing to log on and find your new one! awesome job ^_^