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Profound Notion

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Profound Notion
by crisstiena

A contest entry

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  • zt
    September 23
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    interesting
    depths
    plumbed
    here


  • internal heights
    December 9, 2008
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    wow those words really do go beyond the surface... I like the title too. I fits nicely with the contest and with your poem. Well. Not too much I can say about a four word poem without sounding like some overly philosophical/ wannabe scholar so I'll just say

    "nice write"


  • lunarlunacy
    December 9, 2008
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    Accountability is indeed imperial. Honored to see ya grace this contest with your quill cris.


    • crisstiena
      December 9, 2008
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      The honor is all mine


      • Balldinger silver member
        December 9, 2008
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        ah, you've found lunarlunacy's land of habitation. this guy ruckin' focks, too! hope you score big with these four words - oooh, the 'r' word - that one always scares me.

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