I abhor the whore in you.
You truly believe that the
world is your oyster!
Your soul is obese,
accompanied only by
the heart of a leech!
Such a shame really...
The travesty of your blasphemy!
You disgrace the very air you are
so fortunate to breathe!
Your bigotry disgusts me,
and violates my energy.
What a blatant distaste you
carry for humanity.
I'd like to believe that you
are simply oblivious.
But that would be giving
you more credit than you deserve.
Your soul is cryptic,
sadistically malicious.
I will never understand the
Intention of your existence.
So, in other words....
Eat my shit and choke on it,
you sorry son of a devil whore!!!!
Author notes
Option III. -SAT Vocabulary Version
A contest entry
- Options --- you can has them. by sharptooth.
500 points, ended December 13, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Props to you for using the SAT word bank --- definitely seems to be a lot of pent up anger in this poem.
I liked these lines best:
Your soul is cryptic,
sadistically malicious.
I will never understand the
Intention of your existence.
I thought the rhyme was really cool there.
Some of the imagery was hard to understand, like the concept of a soul being obese, & it seemed like you were using really good words but I didn't understand the context behind them, (ex: what exactly WAS the blasphemy committed?)
Anyway, thank you so much for entering, hope you had fun participating!
-Jaye
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