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And This is My Beloved

My beloved
Is not a wish nor a myth
Not a star nor a gift
He is that- I was always with
In body- spirit and in mind
Before the beginning of time
In his arms I feel at home
Right where I belong...
And this is my beloved-
He is like a tree
From which the flowers
Of compassion and love bloom
His strength is mighty-
His roots deep within me-
His love eternal...

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  • Remnant
    February 18
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    Your love for your beloved is evident and his arms a loving embrace
    Thank you for your entry


    • Jalalbad gold member
      May 1
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      when did you become old slew foot's brother Nick? Fuck both you


  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    God is love, and Love is God
    Wonderful write dear poetess


  • rite
    December 9, 2008

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    My dear friend Tim said it all. I can only heed his words. Thank you for creating and sharing, precious soul.


    • Jalalbad gold member
      December 9, 2008
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      Love is a spirit not an emotion.
      Thank you precious messenger for your kind comment


  • poeticweaver gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Beautiful

    ...........and so inspirational, I adore your ways, and I see your ways are of light and love...you are appreciated my dear friend, and I hope you know how touching these pieces you weave really are. Thanks.

    -Timothy

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