lights twinkle in your eyes
as the world becomes a kaleidoscope
colors dart and cross your face
and you twirl your umbrella- red and
white and green and yellow
with your sheepish grin
and soft eyes.
i catch your Polaroid laugh
in my head, and tuck it away in my heart.
for a second as the world
stumbles into twilight darkness,
i lock my gaze with yours
and your camera catches my smile.
Author notes
OPTION 1:: rosiehardy @ flickr
guess who.
A contest entry
- #32 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
400 points, ended December 13, 2008, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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O.O Siiiiilver O.O
tssh, u think you're funny now. huh... pssh. KA BOOM! okay, i gotta calm down. anyhoo... yea this is a really romantic poem. i love the last stanza... wow wow wow, omgosh it reminded me some certain incodents with someone. the camera, the smile, the random waving.. EEEEKEKEKE (see... u made me squeal again) okay, alls good
anyhoo, awesome poem, awesome silver throphy, and awesome you. 
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Beautiful. I can't tell you which part is my favorite because I loved the whole thing... Best of luck in the contest!
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this was all too romantic (:
"i catch your Polaroid laugh
in my head, and tuck it away in my heart."
sigh. beautiful phrase. if this poem was a guy, he would be perfect
thanks so much for this great write.
& a million hugs flying your way for writing something new after this long
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