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Elevator Lover

If I can, I will promptly disable
The thick wire elevator cable
To paralyze the lift may be a bit tricky
I needed to, if we are to have a quicky
Not going up or down, just stuck inside
I promise you sweetheart, a glorious ride
People waiting on a higher or lower floor
While you are screaming, begging for more
I`m sure if they knew, they would certainly abuse
Me, the bastard that blew that electrical fuse
Not real comfy, knee trembler against the wall
Hang on tight, I`m prepared to give my all
Throw your skirt high up on your waist
No time for foreplay, we must fuck in haste
Thank you for this present, an awesome gift
Hope there is no security camera in this lift
The electrician will fix the problem, we won`t care
Just pull down your skirt, and unruffle your hair
I give you a kiss of thanks, then let out a cry
I`ve caught the end of my penis in my fly
Under my breath I let out a little curse
Then smile, things could`ve been worse 
You walk away, I notice cum on your dress
Damn, what if your husband notices that mess?
Meet you babe, next week for some more
We`ll go right to the top, the sixty ninth floor
 

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    lol this was a nice poem honey i think you really did a great job and the trophy proves you did honey


  • Cannonsfire
    December 9, 2008
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    LMAO...Oh this is priceless thanks so much for the read and the laugh


    • goat1826
      December 9, 2008
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      Did you really enjoy it that much?
      I hoped it would bring a smile

      • Cannonsfire
        December 9, 2008
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        LOL absolutely...I needed one tonight and this was just the tonic...thanks Oh I never say anything I don't mean either!!! lol