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God's Love

Feelings can be deceiving - they will carry you up and down,
but faith is still believing even when you frown.

 

The tears we've shed are life's sweet rain - we always want the

sunshine, but He know's there must be rain.

 

Gods love is always with us - His promises are true, I know He will

see me through.

 

God is everywhere present, just call out His name - my friend

if you do your life wont be the same.

 

Age my be upon me - but, I am not afraid to die - with one foot

in heavens gate and the other here on this earth, if I'm forced

to camp, just outside heavens gate, I will still be greatful and

not, " hesitate "!

 

God has a reason for us being here on this earth and in this place -

He can over come our fears and make this a better place.

 

So, don't give up and don't despair, God understands the way you feel

his fellowship and love are real.

 

I ask you Lord - spare us no heart - ach or sorrow for the heart that is

hurt reaps the richest reward, for only throug tears can we reconize

the suffering - that lies in another eyes.

 



 

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I thought I would try to write something up lefting for a change so please tell me what you think.

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  • swordaxe
    May 14
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    My favorite you have written so far

    i love it mom good job and nice word chooses


  • honey bear
    February 1

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    i certainly found this to be very uplifting and lovely, thank you for sharing this with us, there were a couple of little spelling errors but they ar eeasily fixed and did not stop me enjoying reading this lovely write


  • PoeticLion
    January 21

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    Inspiring Piece!!

    This is indeed a VERY uplifting piece you've put together! God DOES have a reason for all of us, and you portrayed this fact perfectly!!

    Faith Is Everlasting!!

    • poeticlion

      Thank you for your kind words and for reading my poetry it means a lot to me . It makes me happy that I can uplift your spirts .


  • Shantti silver member
    December 28, 2008

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    I found this very uplifting

    "Feelings can be deceiving - they will carry you up and down,"
    Excellent description, and your whole piece is heartfelt and captivating. But I love the ending most.

    "I ask you Lord - spare us no heart - ach or sorrow for the heart that is

    hurt reaps the richest reward, for only throug tears can we reconize

    the suffering - that lies in another eyes."

    So true and to the point.
    We never know what it's like to walk in another man's shoes, so we shouldn't cast stones at glass houses.

    • shantti

      thank you for reading this it means a lot to me . it makes me happy when someone reads my poetry and it touches there heart and uplift there spirits.


  • Angel Felice Seals
    December 9, 2008
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    bob

    Thank you for your kind words. I dont know if my faith is all that strong all I know is theres got to be a better place then the world we live in so why can't it be heaven I ask myself

  • Bob Fox
    December 9, 2008

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    Well

    One can only hope, I that is, that the gates of heaven open up for me. I of little faith salute you, dear poet, of great faith.

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