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I take every sentence for granted;
and I'll continue on the frequency I do
until you can prove you care about anything other than you;
and fix yourself before you lose everything you know.

I'm not here for you to step on.

I thought I made that clear.

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Just a thought.

Nothing to do with Danny.
I wish everyone would quit thinking that.

Please tell me what you think

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  • B sus
    December 10, 2008

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    Am I the only one who has stopped assuming everything negative you write is about Danny?

    It was weird for me to go back an read the above sentence....Hmm...

    Good read

  • ZachofDoom
    December 9, 2008
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    oh geeze.