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Obsession

The voracious seduction of your touch
Eats away the contents of my heart

A momentary look from deep within your eyes
Shudders the wake of my life
Opening up voids once erased by the frost of another

This love
Gives solace to a once emaciated existence

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  • wynd-fyre
    December 9, 2008
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    nice!
    Short but sweet, dark yet beautiful as well. Good job!


  • Have left the stage gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    To bring short poetry into the affray of interest, I praise you much for this delectable piece. The imagery is super defined, and any comment back will reveal your name. This is advance devotion at an early stage of enlightenment.