The voracious seduction of your touch
Eats away the contents of my heart
A momentary look from deep within your eyes
Shudders the wake of my life
Opening up voids once erased by the frost of another
This love
Gives solace to a once emaciated existence
Please tell me what you think
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nice!
Short but sweet, dark yet beautiful as well. Good job! -
To bring short poetry into the affray of interest, I praise you much for this delectable piece. The imagery is super defined, and any comment back will reveal your name. This is advance devotion at an early stage of enlightenment.



