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Drinking Alone pt.2 {Check-out-time}

[Check out time]
2AM
Two beers left
Tastes CHEAP and dirty
  [like this room]

Open the door to silence
[dead world]

Outside
Mercury light burns yellow
*flickers*

DEAD
The moth lies on dusty pavement
He finished his task
Long ago

No one has come to take his place

(I'm still here)

Close the door
I lay on the bed
[the sheets are dirty, but I don't care)

I close my eyes and

Everything
ENDS

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