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One Day

One day,
When we grow up,
We'll pass each other on the street,
And we wont care about the other,
You'll just be a long lost memory.

One day,
When we grow up,
I'll see a picture of you and smile,
But wont go pick up the phone,
And bother to dial.

One day,
When we grow up,
I'll hear what we called 'our song',
I'll make myself think it's retarded,
And pretend to just move along.

So my dear friend as of now,
Lets spend this time together,
Because once we leave this school,
Our ties will be severed.

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  • Befragen
    July 11

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    That was wonderful

    but so so sad

    I'm having the same problem. But I'm afraid and blaahhhh

    You posted on one of my older poems about how you wished you could have things that i wrote in my poems and said your were like what the sequel to mine were. Well I just hit sequel

    I'm going to start writing again and have my own website now, it's a gaming website but we branch out into pretty much everything. I'm going to start posting things there. You are more than welcome to join, i'd be really happy to hear from you and hear how things are going. On the site i'm Befragen. The url is www.gameinciter.com if you are interested. I hope to hear back


  • Puppydog gold member
    December 12, 2008

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    SO TRUE!!!

    This is so true and over the years I have lost all contact with all of my school mates except one.'s


  • Jade.Butterfly gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    Awe, this was wonderful.
    It made me smile and frown at the same.
    Nice job with this one!
    -Mandi