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My Heart Stops

My heart stops when she walks by.
The image of her tight body is always in my mind.
When she speaks its like the way an angel sings.
I want her so bad but I am married.

Those tight dresses that she wears.
Her perfect bust makes my mind unclear.
I walked up to her then she handed me a motel key.
“I said “ baby your beautiful, but 20 years of marriage
is not worth loosing my wife to be.

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Thanks for the great poem... Jackreed3

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  • Wind Walker
    December 12, 2008
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    Good Write

    I like the honor
    Good Luck
    Wind Walker


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 8, 2008

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    Wow, very thought provoking work here!
    It's great to know that you wouldn't sacrifice
    your relationship like that. Well done and
    good luck to you here!




    Jeremy0826