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I AM YOUR PAIN Poetry by Blood Thorn (temp.title)

 

 

I am your pain

you're God

you will serve 

me....

Eyes closed
Blind dose
push the needle

farther in
hush the crystal

screaming rush
One taste,

your disgrace

Fall to pieces
Call the teases
Burning fire,

lust, desire
Putting trust

in pure disaster

Late at night,

cold and fright
Breaks it down,

Hells claim

plays a game,

bones to ache
Bled lies
My Soul Must Die.


I scream

bleeding dreams
Cold passion,

Midnight theme
Iost in

injected screams

Broken mind, Soul divine

I Am Your Pain

You're God

You Will Serve

ME.

 

 

 

 

Poetry by Poet Blood Thorn.

possible editing...by

ears2hearyou.

Artist: felidae84 of deviantart.com

 

Author notes

This is poetry by a new poet.... Blood Thorn

(lots of talent in her)
a gift I give to you to inspire and open your ink and might.

did this give you enough to chew upon and
consider......what are your thoughts?
this is a gift...to pull you out.poetically....a lot of might and ink I hear in you!

To feature poet...Blood Thorn..courageous ink and soul...this is a gift for you to chew upon.

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Comments

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  • Necropocalypse
    December 18, 2008

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    hmmm... this has a very nice sound to it, I think she did a very nice job... I few rhythm errors, but it is to be expected in any song, ya just gotta compensate.

    Very good poem, quite fabulous.


  • moluv10
    December 10, 2008
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    I really like this! She is very talented. thank you sis for shedding some light on her.


  • SiyanaSilverMist
    December 9, 2008

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    IM A HER!!! lol Thank you

    Im a Her, so you know. But thank you. I honestley do not believe that my poetry is all that well. But. Appearently must all think so ^^


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    December 9, 2008

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    oh this is good and i mean good, seriously deep and raw and that is what i love about it, you did a great job and i hope he got to see it ,keep it flowing


  • Mariana
    December 9, 2008

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    This poem is chock-a-block with frustration...and rightly so. I loved the imagery and metaphors used.

    Mariana

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