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Perspective


Determination

Evokes

Perpetual

Transformation








A contest entry

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  • Jesann gold member
    December 20, 2008
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    Excellent
    Such strength and power in these words.
    Very well done.
    I love it.


  • sunoir
    December 12, 2008
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    Alot of truth in 4 words. good one!


  • sense surreal gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    whoa lalim!
    easier said than done though
    personally speaking ...hehe
    profound and polished

    kapag may tiyaga may perpetual nilaga
    joke lang po

    Goodluck Ms Mo


    • Mozaic
      December 10, 2008
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      hmmmmm.......handa namin nilaga kagabi sarap noon....no joke yoon!

      I searched high and low for just the right words that were strong to me...each word as well as as a statement

      Thanks Anna Lee


  • lunarlunacy
    December 8, 2008

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    by George I think we gotta winner. hmmm off to find a clean paintbrush

    not official yet, but this I do believe is IT.

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