On the path of uncertainty,
through the waves of the unsure,
we sail on confusion;
lost in the blur.
Our minds tell us one thing,
and our heart says another,
but while lost at sea;
least' we have each other.
My dear friend, my sister,
I'm not quite sure when
we'll come back to normality
turning now into then
But one thing I know
swear to oceans of blue
I'm glad to be stuck
in the same boat as you.
Author notes
For Sunny Drizzle ♥
This is dedicated to Rae, aka Ripped at the seams, aka Sun Singer.
we'll be okay.
how'd it turn out?!
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I know this made someone happy. Good job. I'm gonna show my friend this because it describes the way I feel. Even if were not in the exact same boat atleast were not too far apart and when we hit land will walk together. I'll give you credit.
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Well you have defined this life..and made it very clear that love is a painful sailing..very true my friend..well said..
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This is one of the best ones you've written. I know a lot of rhyming poetry is really annoying and cutesy... but this one isn't. It's bittersweet in meaning and not disgustingly formed. I don't even think you were trying that hard on this one because it doesn't show an excessive amount of illusion and vagueness. It's just like u wrote it, blam!
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hahaha I disagree but that's from the writer's point of view XD
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Awh, Kerri!
I love you girlie! Thanks for dealing with my drunk ass last night. I'm honored to co-captain this ship.
♥ We're gonna pull through to shore, in one piece or not.
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I can put up with a lot of shit
and you weren't being stupid to me, so it's all good! XD
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