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postcard to lunarlunacy's four-play






Surreal
Obfusc
Loquaciousness
Omnipresent




Monolithic
Individualistic
Nihilstic
Duality




Frangipan
Letterboxes
Yardsticks
Sensibilities





Freestyling
Roads
Empirical
Epiphany





Sensationally
Opalescent
Uber
Letterman





Kinetic
Isotopes
Tracing
Edenscape






Fantasia
Renaissance
Embryonic
Escapology

























Author notes

I hope that at least one of these presentations of four worded thoughts may be sound and profound to you, whilst also hoping that they stand individually I hope they work as a chain aswell as working as acrostic's.


Solo

Mind

Flys

Free

Soul

Kite



I welcome constructive critique. Pick a window to peek through
from the four-play of thoughts or please feel free to feel the breeze of
all in their entirety.



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Comments

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  • individuality gold member
    April 9

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    well i got a mention lol sort of in part of the four word thoughts, Individualistic is that a merging of me and fantastic


  • hawkeslake gold member
    February 5

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    I love the acrostic; it is really impressive and ties the stanzas together. My favorites are the last two stanza, which for some reason rang brilliantly for me. Well done!

    • Yvette Champ gold member
      February 5
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      Thankyou...

      I appreciate your wading through this wordy write dear poetess, smiling that you liked the last two stanzas


  • penman gold member
    December 21, 2008
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    Excellent

    wow some choice of words. So very well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • Floorboards
    December 11, 2008

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    Excellent acrostics my friend, I even recognized some of the words! hehe, really beautiful and thought provoking, well done again and good luck!

    Alex.


  • moluv10
    December 10, 2008

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    Wonderful chain of acrostics my friend. Every set has four words that definately go beyond the surface. Best of luck in the contest.


  • arafura gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    Very clever work. Yes they do stand alone they also are wonderfully linked. Great work!


  • Swangrnv gold member
    December 9, 2008

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    wow

    very ingenius way of penning this acrostic my friend, love the fluidity and deeper meaning in this piece. you so ROCK!!


  • DolceVito gold member
    December 9, 2008
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    LMAO

    You're something else, Yvette. Just love your postcards.


  • charcoal
    December 8, 2008

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    you're keeping the postal department busy with so many postcards lol

    love the title. had to click and see what was happening here (:

    uber... that's cool . so is letterman. frangipan reminded me of a holiday in bali. they had frangipani flowers everywhere (:


  • Nicolette gold member
    December 8, 2008

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    Love each and everyone of them. I definately felt the breeze here and the way you gave these thoughts/words wings!

    ~ Nicolette


  • lunarlunacy
    December 8, 2008

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    i am utterly bewildered at actaully seeing frangipan, after culinary school and working as a baker I almost forgot that word even existed. ya had me rollin off the bed gal.

    and then poetic liscense on Edenscape and Escapeology. groovy. Edenscape... ya outta do a write on that one.

    thanks for the offering, much appreciated.

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