No sight
Just night
I'm so far away
And I'm sorry
I couldn't hold your hand
While you slipped away
There are
No goodbyes in this life
It's a hard
And crule place
I'm sure
I know
That you told me so
No sight
Just night
I'm so far away
And I'm sorry
I couldn't hold your hand
While you slipped away
Just living
Never was enough for you
Cause the struggle
Has to be worth the fight
I'm sure
I know
That you told me so
No sight
Just night
I'm so far away
And I'm sorry
I couldn't hold your hand
While you slipped away
So unsure of everything
I'm just sure
That I'd give anything
To have you here today
And I'm sure
I know
That you told me so
No sight
Just night
You're so far away
I'm just sorry
That I didn't see
That all you wanted
Was to slip away
Cause there's no sight
Life is endless night
And everyday you're
Just toofar away
Author notes
song, poem, life
A contest entry
- Abuse, Death, Pain by psychomonkey.
550 points, ended October 29, 146 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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wow this was so beautiful in such a sad and uneasy way. I liked the lines
"No sight
Just night
I'm so far away
And I'm sorry
I couldn't hold your hand
While you slipped away"
its tragic and then using the same words you jus move it around a little and the end
"Cause there's no sight
Life is endless night
And everyday you're
Just toofar away"
I liked how you did that. well thank you for entering
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*cruel
one of my favorites. u shld type it up cool and frame it and put it on ur wall. xD -
very good. i likes =]
and i miss him too, well i miss everyone who left us actually. the old them at least. well things will get better. 2009 is gonna be good i have a good feeling about it =] -
I loved it.
This should be published. Very entertaining.
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