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Hollow shouts, or so it seems

I'm calling into the fire
But you're all ash
And this violin can't bring you back again
Did you hear me cry?
Yes, I love you
That secret is ours
That bad man cant lie anymore
And goodbye cant tear us apart forever
Empty shouts into the rain
As these ashes wash into the drain

Author notes

I think the original title for this was Hollow screams, or so it seems. But that was inspired by the first line in another poem

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