Fly,
Under
Clever
Kaleidoscopes.
Author notes
(AA!)
That's it really. Sorry, I couldn't resist.
A contest entry
- 4 Words That Go Beyond The Surface, AGAIN by lunarlunacy.
400 points, ended December 25, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do ya see it? Do ya? Do Ya?
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heheheh
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LOL oh thats a good un. IMO through would better than under but yeah, that whole concept is familiar.

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Yeah... but if I put 'through' the word down the side would not be visible!
You missed it?? (I cheated, technically it's five words, does that disqualify me?) -
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LOL yes it flew right past me. heheheheh good un gal.
puts on dunce cap and farts yankee doodle dandee in the corner of shame
no that doesnt disqualify you... silly wabbit. you gotta really just be a blatant jack ass to get a DQ from this ol' boy, I try and give the muses as much room to breath as possible. let em run naked thru the streets on fire if they so choose ... its all in the name of art - the last sacred left in this quagmire.
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