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Chaotic

Massacre

lacking

Forgiveness

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • soul survivor
    December 9, 2008
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    Your words definately go beyond the surface. Best of luck in the contest.


  • lunarlunacy
    December 8, 2008

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    thank you for the entries above and below. i follow the convolutes of your thought process...
    a messy trail but oh so fun rolling in the macabre


  • Clinging-to-Life
    December 8, 2008
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    Corruption within myself

  • Clinging-to-Life
    December 8, 2008
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    Relentless breath of strength

    Entwined corrupted souls collide

    Ambivalence ; Integrity ; Chaos ; Ability