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Espresso Love

She rises early in the morning
To greet the morning sun
Then party's all night long
With the in crowd and everyone
She smells of rose and peaches
And tastes like tangerine
She likes to walk on the wildside
She's a hedonist's wet dream

She's been created by the almighty
She's so perfect like a dream
She's the ultimate in espresso love
I'll take her with sugar and cream

And she's always on the phone
She's a friend to one and all
With her Armani eyes and Gucci style
Her fashion sense is beyond recall
She just takes my breath away
She's got class and so much more
I know what I want
She knows the real score

And she's like music so fine
Her song fills up the night
She's just the perfect score
Like violin strings and symphony delights

She really has no equal
With her hands upon her hips
Eyes so green of aquamarine
I love her espresso lips

She's been created by the almighty
She's so perfect like a dream
She's the ultimate in espresso love
I'll take her with sugar and cream

Author notes

AP Name: dstreetpoet

A contest entry

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Comments

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  • xXCadyBabbiXx
    January 7
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    Wow.
    This is great..
    Thank you entering!


  • ThnxsForTheMmrs-x-
    January 5

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    wow =]

    Ok, so this is, how do you say brilliant? It's yet again not exactly what I was going for but I think this is one of the best yet. I like the flow.
    "She's been created by the almighty
    She's so perfect like a dream
    She's the ultimate in espresso love
    I'll take her with sugar and cream "

    I'd have to say that is my favotie bit.

    "She rises early in the morning
    To greet the morning sun
    Then party's all night long
    With the in crowd and everyone
    She smells of rose and peaches
    And tastes like tangerine
    She like to walk on the wildside
    She's a hedonist's wet dream"

    also a very creative bit.

    I like this alot

    thank you for ur entry

    xx


  • jimek
    January 1
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    I love her too

    Every morning


  • isabellacohen
    December 25, 2008

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    love the poem

    -just a note - i love the poem - because i wish to honour my prompt, i won't give you a trophy,
    in a different contest i most likely would,
    i hope you submit it to other contests,

    best wishes,
    Isabella


  • Simone Brooklyn
    December 22, 2008

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    Wonderful! Repeating the last stanza made the poem that much more powerful, I loved it. This was such a fun poem to read. Thank you for entering.

  • isabellacohen
    December 13, 2008
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    I really liked the flow of your poem and the rhyme.
    these are my favourite lines,

    "She really has no equal
    With her hands upon her hips
    Eyes so green of aquamarine
    I love her espresso lips"

    I really enjoyed reading your poem, thanks for submitting,
    best wishes,
    Isabella

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